Can you add or finish my poem?

Question: Can you add or finish my poem!?

This agony of pain
within me will always stay
this pain that you have caused
will not go away
you may have won the battle
but you have lost the war

can you add anything to finish it!? pls and ty(:Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

they are no words to explain how bad you hurt me
all the bullshit lies that you told me lie within my thoughts!.

just write what you feel then it will all come together

instead of won the battle and lost the war thing why don't you say like you won this round but they are lot more to go or something like that to bring more originality to itWww@QuestionHome@Com

The things you have said!.
The things you have done!.
Made me blinded from the image that has struck me!.
All I have been through
All I have seen
Has not prepared me for this horrible scene!.
All this pain you left inside
It makes me want to run away and hide!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Addition:
I will live on, trust me
But hear my words!.!.!.!.
I hate thee

Okay!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com