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I feel as though my heart is turning cold Those words " I love you " I can't seem to say Pain and fear keeps me silent I go to reach out, but it's as if a force is pulling me back I try to take my anger out on you and push you away But you never leave, you love me still It's as if you know what's truly in my heart I want to love you, but I'm scared to love and lose again I wrote this 5/26/08, last night!. Thanks to all who answer!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: ive never been in love, but i can see how someone can be afraid of given her heart and get it terned away, ive never been in love but ive had my heart broken several times, maybe thats the reason why i cant open myself to people like i used to, thats what your poem means to me, you understand the nature of a girls heart, and write it so well, it scares me how much of myself i see in other peoples words, in your poems, you look like a mirror that says what i cant, that sees the part of me that i didnt know i still had!.Www@QuestionHome@Com very interesting!. very cool also!. i like it!. it;'s a very good poem!. lol the first question i answer in four days turns out to be a poem!. go figure!. i like it!. it tells tons about who you are and what your feeling!. very emotional!. very niceWww@QuestionHome@Com I'm a published poet, and I have to say that the poem was quite well written!. I commend you on your effort and success in writing this poem, and I wish you luck in your writing future!.Www@QuestionHome@Com It's very good!. A couple punctuation suggestions - Make sure you put periods at the ends of sentences!. also I would say "The words "I love you" I cannot seem to say" in line two!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Very poetic! I think you sound like your telling a tragic story but still poetic its awesome!!!! and I sorta agree on the periods good job!!! :DWww@QuestionHome@Com It must have been VERY late last night,eh!? But you'd better call 911 if your heart is turning cold, you could have a serious medical condition!Www@QuestionHome@Com WOW! I loved the last poem you wrote-but I think I love this one even more! I feel you have a beautiful soul, and you should keep writing!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com It's very pretty!. =DWww@QuestionHome@Com okay but a little awkwardWww@QuestionHome@Com wow i know how you feel sometimes!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |