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Question: How afraid are Vampires of Van Helsing!?
Flight of a Countess
“Awake! Lanett, awake
Make haste!
The hunter will be
at your heals by, morn!”
The stranger shrieked
breaking FairSleep
and from the SoftBed
YoungHarker was torn
Beguilement
RushedPuzzlement
unknowing of where
she would be swept
made her tremble
from evil be kept
She questioned
by what they meant
All they would annex
was that she must leave
Her father would stay
and soon her retrieve
till then she must hide
in a place that they showed
out of the towns
and off of the road
Was this what her father
had so often spoke of!?
The meter and rhyme may not be as good here in part 11… but it may fit the story!. If it doesn’t I would not be against writing another!. Would you tell me what you think!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Oh Gamer, do go play in traffic, won't you!?
Siren, I would say that this most definitely fits along with all the others my friend <3
I love this, your writing's getting even tighter as you move on forward with this grand tale of darkness, passion and woe
I'd like to ask you (that is, when ever you're finished with this eerie tale, might I toss some copies in my photo album!? Just for personal use!.!.!.My daughter is reading some now and she looks very involved LOLWww@QuestionHome@Com
No, no, no, they fit!. Don't think that they don't!. This is a very good story, keep it coming!. So, Lanette's father has warned her of vampire hunters!. Will they be able to recognize her when she walks in the day!? How will her father struggle to protect her if he can guard her only at night!. How many of the family's dark secrets does Van Helsing actually know!? All this and more you can ask and keep this story going at the fever pitch that it is building to!. also, it would not hurt to clarify who is speaking!.
Love you,
EvaWww@QuestionHome@Com
This reads very quickly and that is absolutely perfect for this part of the story!. It is quite harrowing!. There is a sense of urgency in every word!. I can see the beautiful Lanett, trembling and wide eyed as she is scurried away!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
What is it!? Lestat and Louis after killing Louis's father or some of the characters from Anne Rice Vampire novels!? Perhaps little Claudia is present here as well!? A bit to familiar a story!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is very fast paced!.!.!. but very fitting for the rest of the series! At least it is to me!. I am awaiting the next one! Oh, wait!!! You have already posted two more!Www@QuestionHome@Com
boo iam very scared!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com