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Question: Just wrote this poem!. Hmm!? Took me ten minutes on yahoo!. Crap!?!?
Sleep is falling from eyes dropped heavy
Concrete laying nothing out right
Slopping around
Heaving before it all sets and nothing gets done!.
Tired of two-damned tired to get
What was set out to do! You won't
Know until you turn around and see
A boot mark or a fingered heart
Remain in the floor!.
What does it mean to say "I love YOU"
Covered by boxes and crates in some
Warehouse where they store light
Fixtures, two names that tore away
Long ago!.
But it's still written though we wrote
Each other off -
Smote each other down -
Broke all we had into little pieces -
Bashed the warehouse, all the lights
And fixtures, boxes and crates
Demolished, laying out in heap
On the cold hardened heart
Named in stone!Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i liked it (:
what a wonderful writer!!!
i perceive love in almost the same way you do!.!.!.
xoxo muahWww@QuestionHome@Com

are you bored!well if you are sorry i thought i could help you on something but i guess not!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

haha i thought you were out of questions!.!.!.!.thats why you posted this on as an answer to mine lol
niceWww@QuestionHome@Com