Here is my poem?

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this is my 4th poem so thanks for the help

Don’t Fall

please don’t fall
away from me
i need you like a bird
needs wings

i treat you like a friend
but see you as a lover
i don’t know how else to say it
i will love you like no other

stand tall, stand proud
and always stand your ground
im oh so happy when you say
i wont give up and i will not stray

you seem so strong
so valiant and free
but i just hope
its not only a scene

you trust and trust
everyone you meet
i truly hope
you wont be beat

i’ve stood beside you
all the way
but now i think
its time to say

please don’t fall
away from me
i need you so much
like you wont believeWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

5/5 stars that's absolutely brilliant you really went deep on this one I enjoyed it especially the part where you say
i treat you like a friend but see you as a lover i don’t know how else to say it i will love you like no other!. Plus it all comes together towards the end!. BrilliantWww@QuestionHome@Com

sounds like you wanted it to rhyme but with or without rhyming it's a good poem!. you should eneter it in the poem competition!.!.!.i think it's poems!.com!.!.!.!.!.i entered mine which was suckish and it won a lot of editors awards and got put in a book of poems!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Having just watched HARRY AND SALLY tonight, your poem is perfect!. You show the way friendship and love build!.!.!. it is amazing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Cool! I like it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

nice

short and sweet, the verses that is

and its easy to understand and readWww@QuestionHome@Com

coolWww@QuestionHome@Com

its sweet and!.!. good!.!. yea!.!. its fineWww@QuestionHome@Com