I must leave you
behind
across the bridge
of memories,
some sweet
some bitter
The bitter
are of no value,
Now forgiven forgotten
the sweet remain
victorious!.
Yet both
taught me
lessons
remembered!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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behind across the bridge of memories, some sweet some bitter The bitter are of no value, Now forgiven forgotten the sweet remain victorious!. Yet both taught me lessons remembered!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I really like this! It reminds me of someone that was in my life!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Hopefully only a poem and not a good-bye!. This is well done as your first this morn!. My compliments!. My only critique would be to include some more commas to help the reader as in forgiven, forgotten!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Flowing thoughts Meandering waves Ripplings moods Tides of worry All float away Carrying debris From a past regretted All the while The bridge looks on Impassively Secretly Frustrated Helpless Seeing only Troubled waters "Damnit"Www@QuestionHome@Com Very good Jenny! I love it! I know so many I should leave like that!. With those same intentions!. Forgiven, forgiven, forgiven!.!.!.!.!. ERRROOF!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com Love this Jenny! Oh if only they'd stay across that bridge where we try to leave them!. Lessons and more lessons to be learned!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |