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Question: What do you think about this Rock Concert peom!?
I wrote it myself, and I'm not so good at this!. So, just dont be to harsh!

Inside the screaming of rock music fills my ears

Despite being small I push myself to the front

The only thing between the band and I is the stage

Inspite of how crowded it is I jump along with the music

Underneath my feet the ground is shaking

The music is inside of me

Over and over it pounds in my head

Until I know all of the words

Throughout the entire concert I sing along

Then I think, "Without music my life would be over"


I wrote this when I was in 6th grade!. Tell me what you think!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
its a really nice poem!. its like a story!. i sooo agree with you when you said "without music my life would be over" i feel the same way!!!! im in 6th grade now so i no how u felt!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Good insight!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's almost liek a story, but I like it though!Www@QuestionHome@Com

thats great!Www@QuestionHome@Com