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Question: Free verse poem for a project!?
This is based on like!.!.!. real events that have happened in my life!.!.!.
Open Topic Poem
Just A Dream
I lay my head down to sleep
Where my biggest dreams and hopes become reality
I wanted to be a doctor
To cure my uncle from cancer
I wanted to be a scientist
To cure my grandma from Alzheimer’s
I wanted to be a marriage counselor
So my parents could be together again
I wanted to be a reverend
To talk to the world and preach
I wanted to be a pyschiatrist
To stop my brother from obsessing about killing me
I turn in and out of my sleep
Remembering these things
I want to forget
But no they keep coming back to me
Each time going deeper and deeper
And as I sleep I begin to feel sickerWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This is a great poem and it brought tears to my eyes !.I am sorry your having so much pain with your situation ' but hang in there'as it will get easier!.I also loved your Iraq poem as it was awesome too!.Heres a star' and wish i could do More!.!.Take care my friend!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
What a powerful, gut wrenching poem!.
In the part in your remarks
I just hid under the bed and didn’t dare to breathe as he walked pass me <--------- should be past
Good work!Www@QuestionHome@Com
one word Unbelievable i can relate to this poem in so many ways like i said before great poet!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
wow thats creepy, but its pretty good!. its similar to a poem called 'the dream' or sumthin im not sureWww@QuestionHome@Com
Wow!.!.!.!.!.!.that is pretty much what i can say!. i dont know how you do it but all ur poems are great!. This one is the best one i think besides the one on the soliders(that one was the bomb)!. this one touched me a lot!. i like how you took what was going on in your life and put in it a poem and not just anyway but in a way that is sweet and touching!. keep up the gud work!. Hey and if you really think that these r ur dreams, then im sure that u will b able to do it!. :PWww@QuestionHome@Com