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Question: Last poem tonight :)!?
Nameless

I am a stranger to myself

Who's reflection do I see!?

No one seems to recognize

No one seems to notice

I am but a wall

I am a piece of scenery

I am undiscovered by all

I slowly disappear, fade away

I am my own demise

Who will save me!?

Who will help!?

If I am a person that is unseen


I wrote this poem about 5 years ago!.
Thanks to all who answer! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Wow, this poem really describes how I once felt~ about a couple years ago~ very good as usual!. ^__^

I really think you should put all these poems into a book and look into getting them published~ =)Www@QuestionHome@Com

The line "I am my own demise" reminded me of Rilke's observation that "with each birth is born a life and a death!."Www@QuestionHome@Com

it's really very good =D you should really consider being a poet!. =D or getting these published into one book =3Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow you must have been going through a lot of pain at that time but i liked it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Gee!.!. I envy you!Www@QuestionHome@Com