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Question: Another poem, please tell me what you think :)!?
Adan Torres

We have lost someone here this day

Loved ones beg for him to stay

But he is in heaven with the angels above

He's remember with great love

Tears of sadness and laughter are shed

He will never again lay in his bed

All we can do now is remember the good times we've shared

And hope he knows all of us cared

His face we will never again see

But in our hearts he will always be


I wrote this in high school when a friend of mine passed away!. He was still just a teenager!. This is the poem that was published after getting it to the finals in a contest!. I hope you like it!. Thanks to all who answer! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
wow what can i say that is just wow, im speechless!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hey this is a really moving poem, i can almost feel your loss!. Wow reminds me of all the people I've lost in my life as well!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Love it! You are so very talented and very mature!Www@QuestionHome@Com

AWW this was really good keep up the great workWww@QuestionHome@Com

keep up the good work~*Www@QuestionHome@Com

it's really sad!. DX I like it!Www@QuestionHome@Com