When it all comes crumbling down, will you be sorry?

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Question:

"No Regret Disaster"

Have I given less to you than I take!?
Have I made you regret your love for me!?
Will you shatter all ties and my heart break,
Thinking of what we had the chance to be!?
Will I see my flaws on introspection,
The reasons we were denied forever!?
Did I ruin our hopes through my deception,
Slice the silver chord and our bond sever!?

You know that all I wanted was the dream,
Love was all I needed for completion!.
Now I see your heart, shredded at the seam,
Lost to my psi-vampiric depletion!.
I won't be sorry that I broke your soul!.
Return to me, my love, and be made whole!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Are you being ironic in the last three lines, or merely demented!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Was deception the act of using him or someone else!? Psi-vampiric, I must confess, I had never heard of and had to look up!. Your last two lines are confusing because there is no regret for breaking his soul, yet you offer to make him whole!. More deception, Miss Vampire!? Interesting poem, penned with a nice flow!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well I don't know, maybe one can break an ego spirit, But I
do think someones soul is off limits!.
Love was all I needed for completion!.

But this poem does not speak love to me, It speaks of wanting control over another, and control is an illusion!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Interesting imagery!. Frankly, if I were the person to whom this is addressed, I'd be afraid to return!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Be made whole by returning to her that broke your soul!.!.!.!.!. she's gonna bite you and make you immortal!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nah, I put firecrackers at the bottom!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i would say look ahead!.!.!. and not back at any regret!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com