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Question: A Poem - Sorry, An Unpleasant Poem - Do You Dislike!?
She sits on cold tiled floors
disinfecting everything
he touched
An inflated plastic bag
collects diseased reminders
of him

Tears attach to her cheeks and lips
refusing to leave
her peace
A life of prosperity
suddenly ending
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I do not dislike at all!. I think it a brilliant and evocative showing of one's soul!. You always have this way of bringing so much out of such sparse words!. I think for this I will always be a great fan, and my heart sympathizes with the woman who is disinfecting everything!. Whatever the case, make sure she does not completely disinfect her heart!. As studies have shown, some bacteria is healthy!. Blessed Be

Eva!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You said it - trash!.
Self-indulgent victimhood reveling!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Powerful!. Well said!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Rather sad, but not at all unpleasant!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Raw truth of too many, Well expressed by your words!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

De ja vu all over again!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com