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Question: A Poem - Sorry, An Unpleasant Poem - Do You Dislike!?
She sits on cold tiled floors
disinfecting everything
he touched
An inflated plastic bag
collects diseased reminders
of him
Tears attach to her cheeks and lips
refusing to leave
her peace
A life of prosperity
suddenly ending
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I do not dislike at all!. I think it a brilliant and evocative showing of one's soul!. You always have this way of bringing so much out of such sparse words!. I think for this I will always be a great fan, and my heart sympathizes with the woman who is disinfecting everything!. Whatever the case, make sure she does not completely disinfect her heart!. As studies have shown, some bacteria is healthy!. Blessed Be
Eva!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
You said it - trash!.
Self-indulgent victimhood reveling!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Powerful!. Well said!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Rather sad, but not at all unpleasant!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Raw truth of too many, Well expressed by your words!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
De ja vu all over again!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com