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Question: I wrote a poem!. What do you guys think!?
Well, I wrote this for my girlfriend about 10 minutes ago!.!.!. Tell me what you think!. I'm stuck on two titles!. Either "Love Is Something" or "Love Is What We're About"!. Anyways, here goes nothing!.!.!.

Love is something beyond what money can buy!.
Love is something that, from which, people hide!.

Love is something that most can't live without!.
Love is something that few people block out!.

Love is something that can bring a smile,
to the saddest man, and the angriest child!.

Love is something that has abled me,
to look and view things in ways many don't see!.

Love is brought brought us together and singled us out,
Love is what we're all about!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
omfg i love that poem i wish my BF would write something like that
and i lik the title
Love Is Something
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Love is what we are all about!. Dont forget to edit the typo before sending the poem to your girl!. Last stanza!. remove the 'is'!. Love brought us together and singled us out!. She'll appreciate this poem for sure!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i love it!
those titles are great too, but if i am to choose between them,i'll go with "love is what we're about"!.
good luck!
i bet she'll love that tooWww@QuestionHome@Com

I think it's a pretty crappy poem but she'll totally appreciate the gesture anyway and think it's way cute!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like it =)

simple yet very effectiveee

& i love the title "love is something!.!.!."Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like both titles, and you did a great job!.Www@QuestionHome@Com