Do you like my unburnt offering?

Question: Do you like my unburnt offering!?

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Yellow bovine mass floats
on sweet slime of the forest
…and the hens weep…
My waffle is complete!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

LOL - loved this !!! Even though I am a French Toast addict - I still relate!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That is one extremly abstract poem!. AND I LOVE IT!!! It's got humor and metaphoric potential!.

90 out of 100!. If you don't agree, that's fine, it's just an opinion, but what good is literature without opinion!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Take the milk away from the calf, the lifegiving sap away from the tree, and then take a hen's babies away!. Add a waffle, and see what you have!. Breakfast, yummy!.!.!. Don't forget the piggy belly!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'll never eat another waffle again, with or without maple syrup!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Food come from weird places when the mind invents them but good eating!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Where's the Beef!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yuck, as we continue to eat in joy and thanksgiving!Www@QuestionHome@Com

No, don't mess with my food!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You do need that pureed! lolWww@QuestionHome@Com

yesWww@QuestionHome@Com