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Question: Mad Easy 10 Points!!!!!!?
If you dont mind, i would very much appreciate you telling me what you think of my poem!.
Thanks:)
("to be left untitled" is the title)
To Be Left Untitled!.!.!.
Blood trickling down your neck,
you needed to bleed just to check,
if you still have any feeling,
you constantly bow down to them kneeling, you'll never be as free as the wind,
you desperately need you heart to mend,
the only cure is a bullet,
all you need is the courage to pull it,
as the seconds pass by you realize more and more that your life's a lie,
finally your mission is complete,
as you lie bleeding under your sheet!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Yes, it's powerful; it's pretty good poetry, but what about you!? I don't care about your poem, except to the extent that it has a healing effect to write-out your life!. I don't know what to say, but I'm going to try!. You sound young!. When I was your age, I was desperate!. Life was horrible, and I wanted to die!. But, listen to me!. It passes!. All things pass!. Life is filled with corners that you can't see around!. I'm not going to "ogle" over your poem, because I've written a bunch like this!. Do you want to hear my poems about suicide!? I've got about a dozen of them!. Would you like to hear about the time I took two bottles of prescription anti-depressants, started hallucinating and talking to my dead grandfather in heaven who told me it was beautiful there and to come over, but there was only one problem: I needed to die first!? then I sat down and started cutting my veins open with a dull razor, when I passed out, and I woke up in ICU with about seven tubes in me!? And after staying awake two days, because they wouldn't give me any medication for sleep, I threw the phone against the wall, ripped it out of the socket, threw over my hospital table, pulled all the tubes out of me, got up and walked out of the hospital!? So you want to hear all that!? I love the intensity of your poem, but I take it seriously what you're going through that made you write it much more!. I hope you will feel better, just because you are a very, very precious thing!. Someday, I hope it is soon, you will forget all this, because miracles happen, and they happen when you least expect them!. Take care, and don't think too many bad thoughts!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
The poem is very powerful!. And if this is how you feel, then you need support!. I don't want to hear of anyone losing a life on here!. You sound like a great person!. But death is not always the answer!. Try to find friends and support!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
WOW!! that was really, !.!.!.!.!. wow!. It spoke to me in diffrent ways like that first line is like the attintion grabber and you want to keep reading!. It is wonderful!. I like it, I like it a lot!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
i like very strong,dark,powerful im into writing about that kind of stuff and feel the same way (but writing poems about this stuff always maakes me feel better)Www@QuestionHome@Com
wow!.!.!.!. im speechless!. it is so wonderful!. very emotional!. keep adding on!. when you do email me it :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
Great!Www@QuestionHome@Com
oh my, well it is very well wdritten, and very vivid!. Keep up the great work!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
wow! thats amazing because i feel the same!.!.i like your poem it descrbes my situation like what i want to do!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
wow very powerful is this how you feel!?Www@QuestionHome@Com