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My teacher said this is a strong force to my poem!.
How can i not make that mistake again!?
this is what i did
Someday you will love the life
You will now on never feel cheesy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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My teacher said this is a strong force to my poem!. How can i not make that mistake again!? this is what i did Someday you will love the life You will now on never feel cheesy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Your question is not clear and there is a typo in what u said!.!. In two separate postings from u, the poem says two different things!. Proofread, and pose ur question again!.!. also post the whole poem (proofread and all) The strong "force" in that line may correspond to what was said prior to that!.!. Then maybe someone can answer more efficiently!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Some day you will love the life Whenever you chose a wifeWww@QuestionHome@Com I think your teacher was just being kind!.Www@QuestionHome@Com you really need to pick a better word maybe than Cheesy , maybe that is what he is thinking!.Www@QuestionHome@Com That makes no sense!. You could have a sucessful rap career writing hot lines like that!. Soulja Boi tell em!Www@QuestionHome@Com she was probaly trying to be nice to youWww@QuestionHome@Com you should say you will never feel squeezeyeWww@QuestionHome@Com |