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Question: Having problems with this!?
Ok, so I wrote a poem!.!. my problem is I'm stuck with something!.!. I want hips to rhyme with lips but!.!. they are too far away from each other!? What do I do!? Please help!.!.!. I'm stuck on trying to make it work!.!.!.but I really want both in it!.!.!.thanks so much!
Two legends,
doing almost the same thing
but different even to the names!.
A promise for tomorrow, showing
smiles with no sign of sorrow on the
edges of their >>>lips<<<!.
In sight but never being touched,
not even by the people bowing down at their >>>hips<<<!.
In them, You put your trust, your faith,
your bliss, in this you are alive!.!.
You give your all because they haven't deceived you
Look a little closer,
Do they even need you!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
!.!.!. a few changes that I might make!.!.!.
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Two legends,
doing almost the same thing
but different even to the names!.
A promise for tomorrow,
smiles shown, no sign of sorrow on the edge of their lips
In sight but never being touched,
not even by the people bowing down at their hips!.
In them, You put your faith, your trust;
in this you are alive!.!. and can also find your bliss
You give your all because they haven't deceived you
Look a little closer,
and you might wonder if they really need you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
promise for tomorrow,
showing smiles with no sign of sorrow
on the edges of their >>>lips<<<!.
In sight but never being touched,
people bowing at their >>>hips<<<!.
In them, You put your trust, your faith,
your bliss, in this you are alive!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
its alright no problem with hips and lips, try switching them!.Www@QuestionHome@Com