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Question: You may like this!?
But whats lacking!?

The gale of every breath exhaled
smothers the fire of my life
you boom as the resonance
of rippling pain in my heart

But as you seep through the pores
on rain laden earth
reaching the valleys of my dreams,
Angel wings start to flutter
and soft butterfly kisses
of memories bloom in me
a spring of thousand lightning blossoms

I hear you in clear notes of
honey dew drips
pitter pattering on the
glass panes of my windows

You dance in my morning skies
as old secret scripts of love
which I read all day long
in the transitting patterns of clouds

As snowflakes,you melt down
into autumn falls
And my cheeks
shine in their pearly tears

And as the soft butterfly kisses
of memories bloom in me
a spring of thousand lightning blossoms
I reach you,washed by moon tides
as your brilliant twilight starsWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
from 1 to ten i give it a 6Www@QuestionHome@Com

good try
(its good) i just do not like it
i gave it a (C)Www@QuestionHome@Com

this is a really nice poem!.!.!.
A+Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like itWww@QuestionHome@Com