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Question: Imperfect!.!.you would like this anyway!?
The gale of every breath exhaled
smothers the fire of my life
and you become the reverberations
of the rippling pain in my heart

But as you seep through the pores
on rain laden earth
reaching the valleys of my dreams,
The butterfly kisses of memories
send trails of lightning blossoms on me
You dance as our old secret scripts
on the clouds
telling me many tales of love
I hear your in clear notes of
honey dew drips
upon the glass panes of my windows
As snowflakes,you melt down
into autumn falls upon my cheeks
in the guise of warm tearsWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
the birth and passing of love!.!.!.you were wrong, this wonderful thing you've made is perfect!.!.!.everyone will love it!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow!. its really good and seems to be really deep!.

I like!. :] Did you write it!? Its feels really meaningfull to me!. I dont really get poetry but I like this one!. Its really pretty!.Www@QuestionHome@Com