Position:Home>Poetry> What do you think about this poem? its called truth?

Fear and Panic in the air
hearts filled with sorrow and despair
falling fast
falling slow
when they said not to hold on to the past
when thay said it was built to last
i fell apart
as the star
without the Heart
beacame the unmasked guide!.

here i lie on the ground!.
facing the earth
facing rebirth
as the unmasked guide set his foot on the ground
i am no longer bound
by the chains of life!.

the unmasked guide placed me on its shoulders
and then jumped from the cliff
while i faced down
to the ground
saying goodbye to the world

i fell through hearts
i fell through stars
for fifty five thousand years
falling fast
falling slow
in total darkness
i observed!.

is this okay!? :I
i just made it up cause i was SO bored!.
its about a person who dies & follows an angel
who is said to lead him to a good place
searching the skies and space and the universe for fifty five days
and then the person saw the truth & it was not what he expectedWww@QuestionHome@Com

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