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Question: A random bit of lyrics I just wrote!.!.!. what do you think!?
I just trust nobody and that's been going on longer than lately!.
Want to love somebody, but it's hard when so many hate me!.
There's too much misunderstanding and ridicule;
all the bull-s**t I'm handed, I've been ready to hit a fool!.
And I'm not talking about f***ing around in a fist-fight!.
Automatics and pistols to grab some new crystals!.
Homicidal thoughts that my mind can consist of!.
Murderous crazy world, it's hard to get the gist of!.
Heard so much fake love, it just gets me pissed off!.
Stick me up for a cheap watch,
I might come back and take a wrist off!.
I'll be a carnivourous animal like Chris Bosh!.
!.!.!. A raptor; I say what I feel and know;
I might play during life, but, I'm no actor
Get drunk and jump from two stories;
I think I walked home without a fracture!.
Take a necklace from me and get mean;
You might think I'm Mexican, or something!.
could be a similarity to an alien abduction!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
wow, think twice before stealing from you, lol, no seriously it's good, I like the flow you have going, good job!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think it's good stuff keep it up!.Www@QuestionHome@Com