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Question: What do you think of this random poem!?
There's nothing like a love that gets in my brain;
it's obvious that I'm a bit skitSO insane!.
Words come flowing, now; that are hard to explain later!.
Now who is he!? !.!.!.I don't know, my mind is busy!.

Why do you have to be such a mystery!?
I'm not as much of a mystery as I want to be!.
Who's fault is that!?
Shut up!.
Wut'z up!?
I'm feeling sort of hopeless; my mindstate changes too often!.
Every couple of minutes, I'm just feeling something different!.
Sometimes, it feels like my body was just made for a coffin!.
It seems nobody really listens; it makes me want to be fitted!.
Then my chest sparks, and thunder sounds inside of me!.
When it gets dark, I struggle to find the light in me!.
I'm just fighting me, not sure what my future might be!.
My head gets less suicidal, and regrets things it said;
Hopes that my future has a chance for good romance;
to taste Aquafina after a midnight dance!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I really liked it, you are a really talented writer!. Keep up the good work!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

oh my gosh if you want to write poems and have to put them on yahoo answers to see if people like them FIND A SITE THAT WILL DO THE SAME!
put them onto www!.poems-and-quotes!.com you can then have people rate and comment them
its so annoying to have sooooo many flippen email saying you wrote another poem already!.

p!.s sorry if this sounds harsh its totes not meant to be!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

After "Wut'z Up!?"
its really good, not to be racist or anything,
but before that line i mentioned, it was kinda ghetto!.Www@QuestionHome@Com