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My poor, deprived dream!. by TD Euwaite If I dream a dream and it does come true… Who’s to blame!? My dream didn’t have the same opportunities that other dreams are born to dream!. My dream looks like somebody else!. My dream can sing and dance!. My dream is a special dream!. Not the person you see dreaming… But the dream itself… *****Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: But is a dream a mimic of another's eternal!? Will it be denied its own differences in a horde of cliche's!. Deprived no, your dream still burns bright, though perhaps not for the world, but you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Once that lamppost gets untitled and tilted, we can explore the two-layered dream or hallucination to determine what is real or concrete and what is imaginary or transitory!. What do we get when a dream dreams a dream!? As for me, I'm getting a headache!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Blame not the dreamer but the dream!. Interesting!. Wishing for something and getting it, with the implication it may not be right, akimbo to the straight and right!. I will have to dream on this!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I hope you understand how difficult it was to not break into an Elvis number here!.!.!. !.!.!."There must be lights, burning brighter, somewhere" !.!.!.etc Makes you wonder though!.!.!. If a dream could dream!.!.!. What would it dream!.!.!.!? Of a world of equal opportunities for all dreams!.!.!.!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com That is an excellent theme for a story -- more from you to build a plot within a plot!. It has so much potential for poetry and prose!. As it is -- it is like a Mobius Strip and worth the constant contemplation!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I guess I cannot blame anyone, the lamp post is sitting straight in my yard, and none of the nightmarish dreams have come true!. Of course none of the others have either!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I blame the warped genie of the lampost for being so graphic!. And you rubbed it to hard by the way!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Indeed, who is to blame if a dream comes true!? Well said!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Contradiction but one worth thinking about!. Dreams have a part of the dreamer in them!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Tugs at my dream strings, Great last line!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |