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Question: True story, what do you think of the poem!?
my head hurts
the pain blinds my eye
I am sleepy and forget
my mind wonders why

I lost my way to school
I go there all the time
I can't seem to function
but I think it's in my mind

I ask the same question
that I asked you before
you look at me and just can't see
behind the closed door

time to eat
I am not hungry I say
I forget names, dates, and places
no, Laura is not okay

rushing now to the doctor
he says one more test
we have to see what's wrong with you
the answer isn't best

tumor, my world splits
will I live or die!?
my mind is spinning now
and I start to cry

benign is a good word
I find that out that day
so many years, so many tears
and I find me here today

MRI last told me
no tumor on my brain
this has taught me not to see
my life, the same

This is based on real life, in 2001 I was diagnosed with a prolactinoma and have been taking meds!. On my last MRI the scan revealed no trace of my tumor, thank God!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Wow it really hits me, it's very good!. A friend of mine was diagnosed with 2 types of childhood leukemia!. He's been fighting for almost 2 years now!. We are all hoping he will be able to start High school next year with us!. He need all the prayers he can get!. All you people reading this, never take anything for granted, especially just living, that is the greatest gift of all!. God bless!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wao!. Good poem and good situation now, thanks God!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

this is a really good poem! it starts to make me think!. also i hope u get better SOON!Www@QuestionHome@Com