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Lift Your Soul
Take hold of life and plant your feet firmly on the ground
Through only those who are true to themselves this greatness can be found
If you open up your eyes you'll find this greatness can be found in you
Have faith be strong and all your dreams can come true
To think of other before yourself will get you a wonderful gift
It is nothing to be seen, only those who's heart is pure can receive this soulful lift
No matter your pain there us still something to be thankful for
Even though you may not see it some where there is always an open door
This is a poem I wrote on 9/1/06, just wanted to know what you all thought of it!. I don't share my poems, so on here is the first time really!.
Thank you to all who answer!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Beautiful, as expected of you, you really capture the essence of the words and their meaning, and conjugate them in such a wonderful way to make these poems, i will be without words to describe your poems very soon, they speak for them self, everyone can see their splendour, and not all of us are as talented with words as you, i dont know for how long ill be able to give this answers to you, every time i read one of your poems i get more speechless, but ill keep on reading them and comment them, even if i have to invent words words to describe my feelings towards them!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
It's a nice inspirational poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
i really liked it, simple message yet very uplifting and creative deliverance!.!. great job!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
it was very uplifting!. ^-^Www@QuestionHome@Com
i loved it, two thumbs upWww@QuestionHome@Com
hi!.!.!.thats a nice inspiring poem!.!.!.!.!.!.i loved reading it!.!.!.!.!.!.good job!.!.!.!.if u have written more Id love to read themWww@QuestionHome@Com
well my souls been lifted lol good job on the peomWww@QuestionHome@Com