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Question: What's your opinion of my poem!?
I got bored one day and wrote a poem about myself!. My friends grunt when they read it, and when I ask for their honest opinion they say it was good!. I don't believe them!. If it's bad just tell me, please! I'd greatly appreciate honesty for my future works!.
I am frail!. I can break,
Should my soul begin to quake!.
I hold dear what is true,
The thing that differs me and you!.
I can hold you in my heart,
Staying together should we part!.
I am a song played by the fiddle!.
Don't try to understand,
I am a riddle!.
To my tender heart you hold the key!.
Only you can make me free!.
Anna Marie Jenkins is a name,
but I refuse to play that game!.
I am a human child, don't you see!?
I'm the one, the only
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It's a very beautiful poem!.
I don't think that it's uncommon at all to feel that way!.
I've been looking for that type of love to!. I've been going through some confusion as to whether or not anyone REALLY loves me!. I think that I'm a sort of a riddle, too!. It's hard to figure out people like us, I guess!.
I'm human, too!.!.!. it's hard to find love like that!.
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Perhaps a few too many themes in here!. Try to keep it with a single idea , and try to develop it as deeply as possible!. You have some good flow here, but more work is needed to refine it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
love!? individuality!? enigma!? at least now i know!.!.!.AMJ is no longer a mystery!.!.!.coz i know you're the one and the only!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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