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Question: It is Memeorial Day weekend, I keep writing poems remembering!. !.A poem about losing your virginity!.!?
"the game"


That first time,
I remember to the day!.
I was only fourteen,
and her name was May!.

We were very close,
both our parents divorced!.
Nothing that we did,
ever seemed that forced!.

Inseperable, we were,
in everything we did!.
Holing to each other,
when our parents hit the skids!.

It was just inevitable,
really meant to be!.
Felt just right together,
our first love you see!.

Both of us were virgins,
playing it by ear!.
Her smooth and silky skin,
I had nothing to fear!.

A little experimentation,
we struggled for a while!.
May and I together,
on the bed we smiled!.

May and I stayed friends,
but never were the same!.
You just can't go back,
once you've played the game!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
yes,, you captured the innocence well!. The first guy who answered is horrible! He obviously has no life!. Its good!. Keep it up!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think so! Easy flow!. Good rhyme!. Understandable!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Roses are Red,
Violets are blue,
Your days as a poet,
Are almost through!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Pretty good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com