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Question: Ever felt hope in the midst of sorrow!?
Joy Will Return
Sadness seeps
into all the corners
of my soul
squeezing out the light
that was once there!.
Death has a way
of knocking the wind
out of your sails
setting you adrift,
in a wide open sea!.
Darkness falls on sorrow;
it hurts to lift heavy eyes
to a rising sun,
and face a new dawn!.
Yet these words keep
rumbling in my head !. !. !.
“All things come to pass!.
But the love will remain
even in the wounded heart;
to spark the joy
that will return one day!.”Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This poem is brilliant!. Each thought was articulated to perfection!. You not only captured our sense of loss, you gave us hope!.!.!.
I thank you for that; and yes!.!.!. I felt this way once!.!.!.
TemariWww@QuestionHome@Com
This is a lovely poem!.
Each stanza is a poem unto itself, showing the sadness of lost love; the way losing makes you feel dead inside; the sorrow that can lead to a rising sun -- perhaps from crying all night; then the heart is open and ready to try again!.
Excellent work!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
C!.S!. Lewis said of him self,
"No one ever told me grief felt so much like fear!."
Your poem is deep into the words that express grief, I especially like the 3rd stanza, one does feel the anchor
is hoisted, and facing a new dawn seems empty!. KudosWww@QuestionHome@Com
Are you Amy Walker or what!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Did you write this or what!?!?!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
its goodWww@QuestionHome@Com