What do you think of this verse:?

Question: What do you think of this verse:!?

(The tune would be something like Taylor Swifts : Tears on my Guitar)

It's so lonely living life on your own
Hugging pillows just to feel you are not alone
It's so hard to open up and let others in
Knowing that you could get hurt again
I just do not understand
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

How uplifting!.!.!.not!.!.!.!.you need to give up your dark view of life dudeWww@QuestionHome@Com

Pretty good!.
Although!.!. sounds kinda sad
BUT if thats what your aiming for; good verse :)
oh and maybe changed the
"Hugging pillows just to feel you are not alone" to maybe something like!.!.!. i dont know just not pillows!.Www@QuestionHome@Com