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Question: Will the Phoenix land safely!?
The Phoenix Arrives
by Elaine P (5/24/08)
We are no longer alone on Mars,
the Phoenix arrives tomorrow
bringing Earth’s scientific probes
to the poets’ sorrow!.
This bird has risen from the ashes
since I can’t remember when
sometimes I wish it would stay down
and never rise again!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I hope she arrives safely!. Imagine her surprise when instead of microscopic life forms she finds tons of domes with poets inside them!.!.!.what will the tabloids say then!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
My father was a pilot and then an air carrier operations specialist and accident investigator for the FAA!. Prior to that, he bombed Berlin with a B-17!. People can take bad and turn it to good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
That's really nice!. Short and sweet!. Great poem!. 70 out of 100, if you don't agree with this score, that's fine, it's just an opinion!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
so will the bird eat from the hand!?
will it sing our solemn song!?
will she sit atop her stand!?
with the KNOWLEDGE on a platter!?
!.!.!.!.
!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
And what be this phoenix bird!?
a metaphor for things uneeded,
or troubled past calling again!?
Pray tell, do enlighten!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
The Phoenix has kicked my @ss!. So, from now on!.!.!.i'm out of Mars, then!. I wouldn't wanna be around people who hates me!. Goodbye everyone!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Is this about Ultrastooge!?
:)
Very nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
if the Phoenix doesn't rise!.!.!.
it can stay in it's ashes!.
ho what then!? [3:5]Www@QuestionHome@Com
And it is said, Cats have nine lives!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Oh no! We will have to shush it away with words!.Www@QuestionHome@Com