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Question: Could a Vampire be noble!?
Bequeathed CoubtChild
Three Centuries
passed in nights
of teaching through
the VampireRights
A father of
InimitableGirl
wishing not
to pass DarkWorlds
unto his child
of LoveMade power
that her passion
Dark would devour
To keep her from
ForeFathers Vow
he would stay
his vile somehow
and raise her as
her mothers daughter
I need to know if this is clear… does it ring true in your mind!? Do you see the nobility of Dracula’s Son!? Though he is one of the dark ones he has morals… of sorts… does that show through!?
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So Dracula's Son is raising his daughter to forsake the powers of night that she has been imbued with and live a mortal life!? Yes, I can see the nobility which Dracula did not retain with his title!. This is a stirring poem and I cannot wait to see more!. Blessed Be, Eva!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I think that anyone should have the same possibility of being considered as nobility!.!.!. if you go back far enough into family histories!.
I did get the impression that the subject matter is a sort of DarkNobility (or, something like that), in your poem!.
In my opinion, light & dark are just perceptions!.
Love, passion & care for a child are some strong emotions that are creatively described, in your poem!. The mysterious nature of your poems keep them interesting!. Your poetry has been very enjoyable!.
I'm looking forward to reading more!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is a fascination to me!.!.!.a Vampire who not only is noble but also loves his daughter so much that he "would stay his vile somehow"!. I have always had a vision of passionate Vampires, but this tenderness is wholly different!. This is completely unique in its perspective!. The imagery is clear and intense yet still mysterious!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
CoubtChild!?!.!.!. do you mean COuntCHild!? I think you do!.!.!. Anyway, this is the most enigmatic of them all!. Strange and alluring, as they are all!.!.!. Three Centuries is a long time, right! Is she still a child!? Does she grow slower than mortals!? !.!.!. these are all questions asked with the best intent!.!.!. to make you look at what you write and see if there are errors at all!.
I love the series, better than many of your others!. I await the next, truthfully!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Do you know how long a century is!? Okay, just making sure! So, how much has changed in the world since then!? Dracula was alive for a long while in most of the legends!.!.!. in fact, he is not dead yet in some!. Though, those are theirs, this is yours, you can do whatever the hell you want in them! I am anxious to see the next!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
i don't know about anybody else but the freaking rocks! it totally makes sense and has the nobility showing in it! its freaking cool!!! i love it!! keep writing girl!Www@QuestionHome@Com