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Question: Is my sonnet any good!? Please comment on it =) Give constructive critisim too please! =)!?
My One and Only Love?
Since the day I met you, I have loved you,
A love that stays undying in my heart!.
When I am not with you my heart feels blue!.
This feeling in my heart shall not depart!.
Together, we have cherished the good times,
It was a dream come true when we first met,
So I show my affection with these rhymes,
Now let's watch the sun as it slowly set,
And these will be the moments I live for,
I love you more than you will ever know,
My one and only love, who I adore!.
This love that I express is what I show,
So now in these lines, it gets to the end,
Together we stay, is what I intend!.
(I also wrote this for my girlfriend, Do you think she will like it!?)Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
That's so sweet, but I see a couple of things!.!.!.
Set should be plural!.
I think you should put in "these are the moments ((that)) I live for!."
Pretty good!. She should like it!Www@QuestionHome@Com
i would love it if someone wrote that poem for me!.!.!.eww no chocolates poems are WAY better! Good Job!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Aww thats sooo good, Yep your girlfriend will love it :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
I am a girl and that is so sweet!!! I would love it if my bf wrote something like that for me!. AwwwwwWww@QuestionHome@Com
dude that is so gay!.!.!.
just buy her floweres or chocolates!.!.!.lol
ur cheap man!.!.!.!.!.!.lolWww@QuestionHome@Com