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Question: Do you sweat a lot!?
Salt Sweats
Sweat, a cleansing effect,
it makes you feel your worth!.
Salt stained maps adorn frames
spreading from center’s shine!.
Fitting that salt preserves,
for chemist man knows well,
toils it takes to produce
and pains often paid too!.
But words also cleanse souls…
stains minds, and gladden hearts
This sweat from our brows hunched,
leaves droplets on pages pored!.
Salt sweats, bane of working man,
also its rarest form of praise!.
Great efforts done, take toil,
and toil without sweat…ill gained!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Ah - sweet blessed sweat - long forgotten in this age of mechanized servants!. Praised be the laborer - those who produce from the efforts of their bodies and minds!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Now that we have products to prevent "wetness," we are probably harming our bodies!. Love the image "words also cleanse souls!.!.!." That is the purest kind of sweat--using our minds to produce words of beauty!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I don't sweat, I perspire, Dem big words!
Salt perserves----words cleanse souls etc!. Kudos!Www@QuestionHome@Com
I have sweat!.
When they opened the door of the plane after landing on Guam, I could feel the air, a tactile goop!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Whether I exercise or sit with hunched brows, I sweat alot!. How satisfying - as is your poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Everytime I sweat I feel like I've been a-salted!.
My compliments for a funny and relevant poem!. Good work!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I do and I do not like to sweatWww@QuestionHome@Com
I sweat a lot!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Only in the heatWww@QuestionHome@Com