A short Dark Prince poem. Is it effective.?

Question: A short Dark Prince poem!. Is it effective!.!?

"stardust"

When i look back,
a thousand hiding eyes!.
Tearing my soul apart,
remains of the thought!.

The face of denigration,
singing songs of tears!.
Ashes reconvene with me,
some long exhausted fire!.

I run my hopeless path,
paved with all your lies!.
I've become the astral dead,
stardust!.!.!.!.!.antigen!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

in the open doors of the soul no more lies a child with a heart of gold
then the world beyound her controle tryies to over take and break some thing unbreakableWww@QuestionHome@Com

I think that you should write poetry for more than just other people finding your words "effective"!.

It sounds interesting and emotional and I feel like I can relate to your poem!.
I'm done being embarrased by tears, so I'll admit that that was the line that I found most effective!.
Music is usually what provokes my tears!.

It was pretty effective!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Stardust, the fallout from a supernova!. Some say it has magical mystical powers, and say there is no such thing!. Who can say with certainty!. Good poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like lines 1,2,7,8,9,10!. You can do better!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, it is effective!. And very good!.

I liked it, as always!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

its aightWww@QuestionHome@Com

ehh!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

its okWww@QuestionHome@Com