How About This Poem? (Rate it 1-10)?

Question: How About This Poem!? (Rate it 1-10)!?

I Miss You (Terribly True):

Where Have You Gone!?
I've Known You For So Long
I Feel Like
I Don't Know You Anymore
You Feel Me Fading!?
I See You Fading
In The Distance
I Miss You Like
A Man Miss A Rock With Love
Im Shaking Now
Why Is Blood Pouring
Down The Street!?
The Love And Loss Is Here
With Its Lonely Address
I Miss You Terribly
No Doubt
You Are The One I Miss
You Are MeWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Since poetry is such a truth of our inner self, its hard not to rate this poem pretty high!. Yeh as the others said you tend to drift a bit here and there, but your meaning is pretty clear!. Its hard to put numbers on something that so clearly is upgradeable!. How do you grade the "Mona Lisa!?" So how can you put a number on your work of art, all you can do is refine until you get it like its really tops!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i would say a 7 cause it started out great then i kinda got a little lost!. sorry but i liked the beggining more but with more practice the whole thing will be just as great as the beginingWww@QuestionHome@Com

I would give it a 2!. It was good and it rymed good in the beginning then it just all went weird!.SORRYWww@QuestionHome@Com

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4; Sorry but it's a little random!.!.keep praticing and you'll get better! =]Www@QuestionHome@Com

it started out good then kinda driftedWww@QuestionHome@Com

7, I loved it but it needs a little work!. Then agian, who am i to judge one's words that come straight from their heart!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

i would give it a 7 out of 10!.!.its OK and goodWww@QuestionHome@Com