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Question: Have you attained your goals!?
Smell Silence
Smell the silence, it reaches for you
envelopes you, wraps you, in its cocoon!.
Sweet, sticky, stagnant!.!.!.it welcomes you!.
Clarity of focus, flame's flicker stilled!.
Primal rhythms populate the haze
calming all sounds!.!.!. even more!.
Smell the silence, it now knows you,
comforts you, warms you, feeds you!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Om shanti !.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
"Smell the silence," "sounds of silence," this type of imagery is my favorite, engaging the ultimate reaches of the senses!. You have done so several times in this poem!. I doubt that I will ever attain spiritual "clarity of focus," but instead will live until the end in the haze!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Smell the silence! I never realized how often I do that!
Another time you said, "Are you really !." Listening that was!.
Another gem you gift us with to draw upon!. Kudos!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
nirvana
no not even closeWww@QuestionHome@Com
GREAT POEM; I WOULD HAVE PICKED DIFFT!. TITLE, BUT IT'S ONLY MY OPINION!! KEEP ON WRITING!!! HAVE GREAT MEMORIAL DAY WEEKEND!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Very good, a lot of truth in it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Funny!.!.!.!.!.all I smell is great writing!Www@QuestionHome@Com
No, if I did I would'nt be on answers now!Www@QuestionHome@Com
thats pretty good!.
great job, keep on writingWww@QuestionHome@Com
My goal in life is to wake teh next mourning, as for your poem, very nice! keep writing for us!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
not even close
i'll prolly die before i doWww@QuestionHome@Com