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Question: Do you like this!.!.kindof dark!?
Stings of grey ice creep from the left
scaring me of my own tranced insanity
As I slip into the eerie territories of
a sinister high of the drugging cold
Volcanos hurl fires to the woods
Spreading wildfires from my right
As i stand caught,trapped between the two
I evolve,into a rock,untouched by the cold,
unscathed by the heat, falling prey
To the never ending torture of doomWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It's a good poem!. But that's it!. I don't like it though, only because it reminds me of a warrior that's swinging in the middle of a field!. Your not parrying any emotion, and your not attacking any sort of aspect!. Your just swinging!. I could always be wrong though, but what good is literature if there is no opinion!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i liked itWww@QuestionHome@Com