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Position:Home>Poetry> What do you think of my peom?Question: What do you think of my peom!? It's still a work in progress, but please tell me what you think!. also what title should I put!?
Every time I close my eyes I remember the good times There are moments I long to forget It saddens me to know they are nothing but memories now I can no longer create new memories with those I held so dear Some have abandoned me and some are no longer on this Earth There are moments I don't want to remember, neither do I ever want to forget!. Thank you for all who answer!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Very good, it really transmites the message quite well, your feelings are strongly present, the rimes are unnecessary to complement the poem, its free of metric, its very rich and its very sensible, a poem of beautiful character just like its creator im shore!.Www@QuestionHome@Com That is a sad, yet beautiful poem!. When I read it, it brought back some memories of my own-again beautiful poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I think thats a really good poem!!! Here are some ideas on what I think you should call it: Memories A moment in Time Good Times Fade Away Close my eyesWww@QuestionHome@Com This is an excellent poem in my opinion, i love to read poetry!. I can relate to this poem really wellWww@QuestionHome@Com good title- all good things come to an endWww@QuestionHome@Com i like itWww@QuestionHome@Com I loved it! =DWww@QuestionHome@Com the best poem i ever read give it to u r friend or boy friend good lcuk wsome poem u should enter a contestWww@QuestionHome@Com |