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Question: Does your train of thought ever get stuck in the roundhouse!?
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Outside,
tied to the post
as the cold wind chills
the bones…
dusted swirls, course blowing sand
tears the eyes!.

Inside,
comfort resides,
fire and wine warm
the bones…
frilly turns, and the postures
we learn!.

Below,
Aldermen bribe,
lies they contrive bare
the bones…
The King is dethroned,
Bishops atone!.

Above,
In the clouds
Where fairies and will-o-the-wisps have
no bones…
I live alone,
my vaporous home!.

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I like it, but the only time I ever had anything stuck in a roundhouse was when the guy told me the restroom was in the corner!. I never found it, but after a couple hours, I didn't need it any more!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

AH - sounds like the wine speaks!. Yes - a warm fire and spirits - can ease a troubled soul - and put them in an euphoric state!. This rest is sometimes welcome - if one becomes numb or depressed from the events of the day!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Four photos
Side by side
Some are sad
Behind others we hide

Four photos
On display
A sad serf
A kingdom so gay

Four photos
In black and white
Which one would you choose
Which one is right!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Intriguing, And the last stanza a comfort zone, was welcomed!Www@QuestionHome@Com

It don't matter: N,S,E,W--inside, outside, above, below--it's all the same at the core!. C'est la Terre!Www@QuestionHome@Com

My train of thought leads me in circles all the time!
I like this poem a lot!Www@QuestionHome@Com

My mind has been known to enter a loop!.Www@QuestionHome@Com