Is the problem with high-flying poems that they come crashing down very hard?

Question: Is the problem with high-flying poems that they come crashing down very hard!?

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Above the sunlit cloud-tops
where atmosphere is rare,
I drift along the jet stream,
miles into the air!.
I sail above pollution
confusion and despair,
I don’t look down
onto the ground…judge
link or compare!.
I fly high, up up in the sky
above, in rarified air…

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After reading your example I would say that even having the suggestion of crashing down very hard controls my reading!. One can not even think for a second of the falling if one wants to experience the flight in full!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

My free soul shines for all to see as it rises and it flares!.!.!. still never once looking down upon the bounded---grounded world!.!.!. soaring away without a care!.!.!.

*I like to write, dunno if this'll help, I'm kinda in a rush!.!.!.*Www@QuestionHome@Com

I really do like this sweet poem and how you said I don't look down into the ground ,,,,,Judge' like or compare !.This is the way i look at things !.as to have less drama!.lolWww@QuestionHome@Com

Okay, now just a little higher, just a bit farther, until we can't see any of it any more, except perhaps, with a telescope!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's got to be kind of hard reading a poem that is this rarefied!. Does it need some oxygen!? What you penned doesn't as it flies well at any altitude!. Compliments avatar Du jour!Www@QuestionHome@Com

A very lovely poem that didn't crash down, yet we all know that what goes up, must come down; thus, we will be waiting with baited breath for the next stanza!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

How many solo flights does one get!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

!.!.!.and I am flying with you, not judging, not comparing!.!.!.just flyingWww@QuestionHome@Com

I'd like to hitch a ride!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I liked it it would be better with more lines!.Www@QuestionHome@Com