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sleep sleep
me and sleep
we don’t speak
we agree to not believe
dream dream
seamless schemes
planted seeds
for me to bleed
wake wake
eye’s mistake
close the drapes
groping at the formless shapes
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sleep sleep me and sleep we don’t speak we agree to not believe dream dream seamless schemes planted seeds for me to bleed wake wake eye’s mistake close the drapes groping at the formless shapes *****Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: This is awesome T!.D!. as it feels when we try to sleep and a million things are popping off in our brain and soon i would see dots and flashes as my body and especially my mind is pleading let me sleep Now lol You described it perfectly!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com A premise quite amiss, No OTC for this! It calls for some Butalbital -- Or maybe, dammit, dash it all, A kiss of dear Prince Valium Will make thee dream of kingdom come!. No time for proffered innocence, If thou desire'st somnambulance!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Scratch, scratch itch and burn I should have kept my trousers on Along with her my sleep is gone Cough, cough now it's always soft Instead of speaking on I must wax off!.Www@QuestionHome@Com It's three o'clock in the morning no dance, but all night long sleep and I negotiate and always, like war and hate the battle goes on and on!. Some battles will never be won!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I absolutely relate to this poem!. You have the last stanza to a T -- do you watch me sleep and then blunder around when it's light!? Excellent poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com Tyler used to say "Sleep is overrated!." He's changed his tune in the past year!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Sleep and I do not speak either!.!.!.hence the reason I am here commenting on your poem at midnight, when I have to get up in 5 hours!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com go go day is slow to and fro when to sleep, i do not know and a big bottle of prozacWww@QuestionHome@Com |