If not, can you explain to me what would be!?
My heart bears the thorns
of one thousand roses!.
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My heart bears the thorns of one thousand roses!. Each hand-picked by you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: yup, 5-7-5 about a person!. I liked it too!. The pain underneath the perceived beauty of a relationship we--the observers--all see as good!. Hey, the guy below me's right: there's only 6 in the second line, I can't count! Of course, 5-7-5 is more an arbitrary rule and many who write do not subscribe to the rigidity of 5-7-5!. Poet's choice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Kind of but, you are missing a syllable inthe second line!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |