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Question: It got deleted!. Will you rebel and read!?
FADED SATIN
I watch you,
still sleeping,
whispers of the dark
embrace you!.
So pure
and gentle,
you hold the world
in a kiss!.
Quiescent,
mesmerizing,
with a voice
that breaks night!.
I watch you,
still sleeping!.
You will never sing
again!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Shall I sing for you
a lullaby!.
A song so very sweet!.
One that puts your mind to rest
And gives
Eternal sleep!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Very interesting and darkly beautiful!. It could be a person in a coma, or dying that you speak to, or it could be that you are leaving this person behind and their sorrow will be complete!. I cannot understand why this was deleted at all!. It has a "voice that breaks night"!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I cannot for the life of me understand why they had deleted you beautiful poem!.Unless it is the tones of necrophilia that worked contains!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
COOL BEANS! I likey when they make mention of strange things!. i do not care that the name has little visual meaning to the poem, it works! And have you ever tried getting beans out of satin!? Not easy!!.!.!. not that i wear any satin apparel!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Honestly, I love it!. Especially that last part "I watch you, still sleeping!. You will never sing again!."
Wonderful work!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
I sleep
While you watch
the nightmare fades
with your whispered lullaby
So that I can sleep longer
will you sing to me forever!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
"So pure
and gentle,
you hold the world
in a kiss!."Www@QuestionHome@Com
I will never understand them!. The imagery is intense!. I like this poem very much!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Beautiful, and profound beyond words!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
the smooth covers invite me to sleep
but waking sleeplessness they taunt!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
very interesting!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
The poem is beautiful!
It's only my opinion, but I would make the last line a happy one!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I like this poem!. Did the person die!? I mean is that the idea!? I like it good job!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Super! You are really gaining strength as a poet!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
You are on fire today!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
thats really deep!.
i like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
this is kinda creepy!.!.in a sweet way!.!.!.how is that possible!?!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Yeah I can see why it got deleted!. It really sucks!.
Hickory dickory dock!.!.!. oh, nevermind!.Www@QuestionHome@Com