I'm up for any kind of feedback or reaction you might have!. Lately I've been going for a very conversational voice in my poetry, but still with an emphasis on language, albeit more subtly!. What do you think!?
-Gay Pride Memory: San Diego, 2006-
I was in a bar in San Diego!.
A drunk guy sat across from my friend
and me and stared at us!. He
looked right at me and said,
"you're fat!."
I only laughed because
I was speechless!. My friend complained
to the bartender who told the
guy to leave us alone!.
No witty comeback from me!.
Fat and stupid!. It was then
that I noticed that the shirt I was wearing,
which I liked in the
store, was too tight on me
and not very flattering at all!.
Kind of a bummer!.
At least the offender
wasn't cute!. After he left, the bartender,
trying to make me feel better, made a racial
comment about him,
which frankly wasn't helpful!.
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