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Poetic Licence (a poem in two acts)
Scene 1 - Caught!
(siren, lights, breaking noises, crunching footsteps)
"POETIC LICENCE, DRIVER"
"I had it somewhere!
It was!.!.!.!.!.!. in my top pocket!
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.and NOW it's not there!"
(sniffing sound, scribbled notes, deep voice)
"WRITING UNDER THE INFLUENCE"
"But what do I care!
Go ahead and arrest me!.
But it doesn't seem fair!"
Scene 2 - Court!
(after the fact, before the judge, a plea)
" Poetic justice, your honour!
So put me away!."
"INDECENT EXPOSURE"
"Of words that I say!?
But I do have the write
To put rhymes on display!
In freedom of speech
So I'm guilty!.!.!.!.!.!.OK!"Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I liked your poem!.!.!.
I hate it when people on here read poems and tell the author that they should be writing poetry in a certain way that they think is more poetic!.
It's like music; if you don't like it, you don't have to pay attention!.
It sounds like you're talking about me!. I think I lost my poetic license!.!.!. boo hoo (ha ha)Www@QuestionHome@Com
I thought that was a very interesting poem!.
The style is unique, I have never seen it before!.
To tell you the truth, I was quite impressed!.
However, was the guy guilty in the end!? Guilty of what!? Writing under influence!?
Hmm!.!.!.writing under the influence!.!.!.I always write under the influence!. The influence of memories, inspiration, and emotions!. I'm guessin you should lock me up then!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
You took some license with this, but in the end it was worth it!. An enjoyable read!. My only critique would be "indecent exposure" as it does not work for me in setting up anything!. You could think about expanding the writing under the influence theme!. A term used in the states is DUI (driving!.!.!.!.influence!.) Perhaps change Driving to Doodling!?Good job, overall!. This gets a star!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Very clever and funny!. I like "indecent exposure," putting poetry not up to par on display!. I would never have arrested you for DUIP (Driving Under the Influence of Poetry)!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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I'm sorry but my poetic licence was revoked due to faulty couplets!. I'll try to help when I get my license back!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Want the truth!? A bit scattered, but interesting!. Doesn't quite hit the mark!.Www@QuestionHome@Com