MY POEM !!! help?

Question: MY POEM !!! help!?

Can you rate it and critique it please 1-10

I WANT YOU

It’s everything I can’t have that I want,
You’re everything I want,
Nothing I can have,
You’re everything I’m not!.
But will die for,
You’re everything I need,
And can’t live without,
You’re out of my league,
Yet still strive for,
Although I’ve got no chance,
I want you to know,
I won’t let you go,
I want you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

ile be honest !.!.i give you a 2 !.!.!.for the 2 points you give me!.!.!.!.its not very good!.!.!.!.!.seamanabWww@QuestionHome@Com

I really enjoyed your poem!.

It shows an unusual level of tolerance and acceptance of a personality which you might not feel is very similar to your own!.

I've always regretted it, after-wards; when the same sort of thoughts prevented me from taking a chance!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

its very sad and heartbreaking to read , but your mind is set and there is no changing, so i cannot critique or give opinion but only say sorry for the way u feel and too bad it had to end and stay this way!.!.!.i dont want to rate sorry!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Good poem did you really write that!? I would give that an 8 in a half, it's something you have to really read to get and it's deep that's what i like about it so much!. But keep writing poems and putting them on here cause i will rate them!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I actually really like it!. I think you can fix the ending a little bit because I feel like it doesn't really end!. I almost feel like it should go on more!. But other then that I'll give you a 9;)Www@QuestionHome@Com

i would give it about a 5!. it seems a bit like desperation!. are you that fixated on someone!? also seems a bit stalkerish!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow thats!.!.!.!.an amazing poem it!.!.!.!.!.!.hmm!.!.!.!.wow!.!.!.well id say 10 absolutly!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i would give it a 5 it is kind of cheesy thats why!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Good i give it an 8!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com