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Question: What do you think of my poem - Unappreciated Love!?
Unappreciated Love

I always loved you!.
Forgiving was never a roadblock!.
There were never shortcuts or detours
To make you lose your way!.
My path was always filled with light!.

I gave you everything I could think of,
No expense was spared,
No cost was considered!.
All I asked in return was that you loved,
Me!.
Your mouth said you did,
Your heart became mute!.

Soon you didn't return,
My calls!.
I kept getting your "voicemail"!.
Yet when you were down,
You called on
Me!.
I was there!.
When you got on your feet
You forgot all about
Me!.
I still love you!.
I just want you to come home to me!.
My Love is Unappreciated!?Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It makes me thank God that His love is unconditional, pure, and perfect, lacking nothing!Www@QuestionHome@Com

What a lovely poem
and I say love(ly )
It talks about your love for someone
however the person would be unappreciative
Not returning voice-mails
or calls
You have reached out to the person
to no avail!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is sad and beautiful!. Unfortunately, our love, at times, is unappreciated and unrequitted!. What do we do!? I don't know !.!.!. You've captured this torment!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

How effortlessly you write a great-meaning poem! Beware the simplicity of the meaning!.!.!.this is packed with unwritten meanings!.!.!.barely under the surface!.
You really do this well and good, Semper!!!
We need your voice here every day!Www@QuestionHome@Com

The love from heaven cannot be totally comprehended by mankind!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Me likey!. Very well-written, Semper!.

EDIT:
Was this Holy Spirit inspired, Semper!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

To me, this started extremely strong and compelling, but the last stanza lacked the same punch!. Still, a very good read!. My complimentsWww@QuestionHome@Com

Perfect on the Lord's day!!! What a lovely piece of poetry!. So deep and so true!. You are so, so talented!. Words cannot say enough!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Lovely---------Kudos

"Free will run wild!."Www@QuestionHome@Com

That was so beautiful! I can't even express with words how touching that poem was! Simply lovely!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Lovely, Semper!. A very important message too!Www@QuestionHome@Com

That is realy freakn good, you should put it on poetry!.com!Www@QuestionHome@Com