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well ive kinda mixed mcr's lyrics from 2nd album into a poem

I will avenge my ghost with every breath i take!. im coming back from the dead and i'll take you hom with me!. im taking back the life you stole!. Too much , too late, or just not enough of this pain in my heart, for your dying wish i'll kiss your lips again!.

Ever get the feeling that you're never alone!? And i remember, now, at the top of my lungs in my arms she dies!. If you were here i'd never have a fear!. So go on live your life, but i miss you more than i did yesterday!. So c'mon show me how, cause i mean this more than words could ever say!.

If you marry me, would you bury me!? Would you carry me to the end!? Dont stop if i fall, and dont look back!. Oh baby dont stop, bury me and fade to black!. Whats the worst you take from every heart you break and like the blade you stain, well ive been holding on tonight!.

Do i need to add stuff or take stuff away, plz comment!. thnxWww@QuestionHome@Com

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