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Question: An angry poem for Sunday!. Not Mad, just seems perfect!. Comments!.!?
"i am done"
Taken all that I can take,
you knew whats at stake!.
Left me alone another night,
by God, i see the light!.
Done with all your stories,
another sad, sad, song!.
I'll turn around, not look back,
A ghost is all you are!.
I'm through, I'm done, It;s over!.
done playing your damn game!.
Nothing left for me here,
If I stay, I go insane!.
I hope your life if perfect,
the opposite of mine!.
Hopping bed, to bed, to bed,
practicing your oral skills!.
You took my heart, crushed it!.
please leave me alone!.
never want to see your face,
find another to throw you bones!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It was good Steve!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
ahh i miss writing poetry like that!. i cant think that dark anymore!.
every poem that i read from you makes me think of what i used to go through!.
wow!. i love your poem!. amazing work!. keep writing and ill keep reading:)
ahhh heheeh i love reading your poeeemmss:)
take careWww@QuestionHome@Com
I think it's very good and I don't BELIEVE it's fictional!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Hmmm!. I'm glad I'm not your SO!. Being betrayed is certainly no fun, but it can make you stronger!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
yea i liked it mateWww@QuestionHome@Com
Sounds like you're telling someone off!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
*hugs*Www@QuestionHome@Com