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Question: What word could I use for the end of my poem!?
Listening to the sound of inspiration
I dance
and smile
Even though it came in bits and pieces
I keep running towards the moon
Suddenly I feel !.!.!.!.!.
and thats that!. I cant think of the word Im looking for, something reminds you of!.!.!. on top of the world, fearless!. its on the tip of my tounge!.!.
and which sounds better
"I keep running towards the moon" or "I keep running into the moon"Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
inspired!. invincible!. unbeatable!. and the towards the moon sounds better because i picture some guy running into the moon like running into a wall!. so the towards the moon is better!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
i think maybe the word is valiant or maybe you feel valour, or brave or something like that!?!?!?!? and i think twords the moon sounds the best- just like you have it!. great poem by the way :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
I like "I keep running toward the moon"!.!.!.!. towardS is not a word!.!.!. it is toward!.
For your last word, how about
Suddenly, I am free !?!?!?!?
Suddenly, I feel liberated !?!?!?!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
spirited
I keep running towards the moon sounds better!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I think that "I keep running into the moon" sounds a better!.!.!.not as ordinay!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
weightless,
free
unrestricted
hope this helpsWww@QuestionHome@Com
at home!? (i suck in poetry)Www@QuestionHome@Com